The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion. The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
Recommended to me and I absolutely love it! Hoping to see more chapters soon, may this review add a smile on the author's face as studies do show that good music, laughter, and peaceful surroundings is a great variable to releasing dopamine in our body; and more dopamine mean more stories, so kudos!
Espero la segunda parte este libro me esta gustando quiero ver como Ariel sufre😈☠️💀Saludos para autora 🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
I really like to Read this, please continue..............................................................................................................
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