Pick Me Up!

SAAAAAMMMMEEEEE

The author of the original novel has made the decision to start again from the beginning and has abandoned this novel/version. The updated story can now be found on the webnovel titled "Dawn of Legend: Rise of an Extra."

Good story. Couldn't stop reading it

awesome fabulous fantastic story.. interesting

Amazing.
Hooked from the beginning.

it's still ongoing......it's going to be a never ending story.......

Alright, if you want a TL;DR, the manga doesn't do the VN justice due to its rushed nature, but when it does hit, it hits well.  

Now, for the downsides of the manga:  

- The art style differs from the source material. While the girls look good, Tomoya and Takafumi are barely recognizable.  
- The plot feels extremely rushed. It skips over a key character like Takafumi, reducing him to a minor role. Additionally, Tomo's route is barely developed, which was a significant part of the VN. Her chapter is so fast-paced that it’s hard to connect with her interactions, unlike the VN, which handled this perfectly.  
- No music, obviously because of the medium. However, the VN's soundtrack was an essential part of the experience, capable of bringing tears, especially during the ending.  

Now, for the positives of the manga:  

- The first and last chapters stand out as the best, with the second chapter coming in third. The opening chapter captures the humor and lightheartedness of the VN's prologue, while the final chapter hits emotionally (though not as powerfully as the VN, which made me cry). It effectively conveys Tomoyo's pain and determination, staying true to the source material.  
- The characters, despite lacking depth, remain faithful to the source. Tomoya is still a blunt and kind jokester, Tomoyo remains girly and determined, and Kanako keeps her silly demeanor, masking her troubled past.  

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I have to say, this was a highly enjoyable read despite its brevity.  

Story: The story is simply exceptional, as one would expect from KEY. It's an outstanding narrative from beginning to end. However, there were a few elements that left me slightly puzzled, such as Tomoya's memory loss. Like many of KEY's works, the story is intricately crafted and finely tuned.  

Art: While it may not be a masterpiece in terms of artwork, the illustrations are certainly well-done. There's a great mix of action scenes, emotional moments, and chibi designs scattered throughout.  

Character: Although the cast is small, it's one I truly adored. Tomoyo's personality has undergone significant changes compared to her portrayal in the Clannad anime, whether that's for better or worse depends on how much you appreciated her in Clannad. The characters are diverse, and I enjoyed each one's presence and the impact they bring as you progress through the chapters. This adds an element of growth and strength.  

Enjoyment: As mentioned, it's short but incredibly impactful. This manga has quickly risen to become one of my all-time favorites, and I genuinely hope it gets adapted into an anime, as it holds immense potential.  

Overall: Even though it didn't receive a perfect score, I absolutely loved this manga. Initially, I was skeptical about why Tomoyo warranted her own spin-off series rather than continuing her arc in Clannad. However, I now see Tomoyo's character in a new light, and she has become one of my favorite characters in both this manga and Clannad.