I'd give it a 3/5 if it wasn't for the poor character design of the MC, and the development of the story itself lacking.I found myself skipping through paragraphs each chapter simply because they weren't entertaining and couldn't keep me focused on them. The story itself, from the 30 chapters I read, focused more on everything else than it did the MC and his own character development, which, in my opinion, destroys the entire purpose of the first bit of chapters which are typically used to introduce most characters, and show character development to the MC.The chapters themselves felt like they kept getting shorter and shorter, with like almost nothing interesting happening at all during the first 30 chapters.Overall, just a bad story, poorly thought out imo.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this.Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word.It's collection. What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.
didn't really like the novel felt everything moving at a slow pace and some weird impractical things happening every now and then overall i wasn't impressed but its not the worst novel i read its just bland because of how many novels i have read that start exactly the same way
This is a great novel, mc is unique and the story is fun to read you don’t get boredMaybe more detail about the mc cultivation but it a great novel I recommend itGive it a try
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