This is one of the most disappointing stories I've ever read. The story concept is fantastic and the setting is amazing! Unfortunately, the main character continuously shows no growth mentally, and slowly devolves into a psychopathic killer who cares only about themselves. They repeatedly tease the readers by showing a small amount of emotional growth, then immediately revert back into being a heartless killing machine. If you want to watch someone fall into being a villain, I guess this story is for you. I wish there had been a tag for it, because I wouldn't have wasted my time.
The sentences are poorly written. First, it give me headaches trying to understand the words used. Second, the story becomes even harder to understand. Lastly, the words messed up are just terrible.
I have not read to much (about 20ish chapters), and the book seems to be good. The world is an interesting idea and deviation from regular system reincarnated or transmigration books, but still has recognizable similarities. Might be a book to look out for when your finished your other preferred novels.
Instead of giving you a review, I'll write you a few sentences of what this book is like.There was once a barn with horses and pigs. One day, a pig and a horse crossed each other. They looked at each other but did not speak, as pigs cannot speak to begin with. Actually, horses cannot speak for either. In this world, no pigs or horses were able to talk. Although both animals had their grievances, they passed each other, not being able to convey their thoughts as they were unable to communicate. You're welcome.
Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile.And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him.And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar .All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
Don't mind me, just here for the experience. I wonder if my 140 characters are over yet?Lalalila lalilalalalailalalalallalalalalalalalalallaallaalalalalaalalaallaalalallalalalalalaallalalalalaallalalaallalalalallalaaallalalaallalalalalalaalallaallaallalalaalalallalalala
The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..the romantic bits are good the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading. bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
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