Chest ripped open like plastic, a still beating heart exposed to the air, gripped in Atlas's hands that are bulging in veins, as if the vessels cannot handle the sudden burst of strength, inching towards an absolute shut down. To pop and explode.
Everything was quiet. All he could hear was the sound of the wind blowing in his ears and the chirps of the birds overhead. It was so… serene, peaceful even, just like it was before his sister died. How many times had she told him to just close his eyes and listen? And he had never listened to her until now, when it was too late.
5 star for another masterpiece i have read. It’s plot was 🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻, the characters and everything especially Akari, I’m hooked. The way how Asahi and Fuyutsuki died early but still you showed us their strength despite dying. The bestx👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
The writing is fun and vivid, the progression in levels and skills is consistent, with each accounted for.Its plot structure and characters, the personalities, and everything, they click.Yes, they click. 10 outta 10, and better than other factory-produced creatures that pervade this place.Happy reading. Happy writing.
He is one heck of a overthinkning bastard. Gotta hand it to the author reallu, i am pretty sure you could write an entire chapter with just his thoughts.
Although I don't read many Xianxia novels, I must say that this one is good—it's clear and concise, and I enjoy the MC. It's entertaining to read; let's see where it goes, nice god Pro.
Haven't read it, but the cover is cool, I'll tell you all what I think when I do read it. - ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is my first time writing a novel. The story will be a little slow paced at first so please bear with me. i have planned a long plot line so you will enjoy it.
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