All in all. Great idea, terrible execution, and web novel really needs to start quality checking. They're way too many poorly cut diamonds. Because of this there's so many stories that would have been good but turned out terrible, because of either a bad writing habit or repetitive simple mistakes(ect). I especially think they should encourage polishing up old chapters, especially when the writers need a change of pace. besides revisiting old chapters will always a good thing.
A good book. Every time I read it, the few chapters that there are get better and better. Very good character development although, his powers could be cooler. But there's only 19 chapters. It's getting there! Look forward to seeing more
It's okay, though sometimes I feel like the novel was written by an AI, a few plot holes, and the story just processes too quickly, also doesn't feel like the main character has any actual problems or challenges, as he usually always wins
First of all, this novel's system is good, I loved it. military system is interesting, and spawning soldiers directly, not by buying them or finishing a task to get them, is much interesting.I imagine, in the future, when the MC advances, these three soldiers level up, and if anyone is dead, he has to summon another one, level zero, and start training it again from scratch.Nice idea, keep the good work, and added to my library.
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Gerald Fireborn, will he be able to return to Neloron? Will he be the one to destroy the BS Sect? Or, will the MB Sect Elders backstab/dissect him for their own gains? I want to know more! How his story will unfurl.
This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.
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