Ocean Fishing Master

Nice, please be selected I cant wait for more.

The novel in it self is very niche, the characters are developed in a weird sense of obedience and mannerisms. The progression is satisfying however as of recent the translation quality can only be labelled as a "expert machine translator" its piss poor and i regret buying privilege.

It's great but could use work on the main character. Loved all of the novel except the main character. He's meant to be some genius mage who is immortal... but he talks like a plain teenager and he doesn't seem very intelligent? He's meant to have the title of Sage but he's not inquisitive? The closest to wanting to learn new things he gets is just being interested in cultivation. Which, that part of him being interested in cultivation seems quite forced. It should be more smooth and gradually interested in cultivation. Instead, he's foregoing all magic immediately to learn about something he read in a book once pretty much.

the mc is extremely smart. /sjsndkkdkdkdnmdkdkdkdkdmdkdkdmdkdkdhdjdjdijdjcjcjfjfjfjfjfjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjdjdnjdjdjdkdkdkxkkxkxkckcckcckckckc

CONTINUE AND GOOD LUCK                                                                                                                           

Sinseramente la historia esta muy buena pero hay un problema a partir del capitulo 40 en donde tienes que desbloquear lo desbloqueo y me sale la letra en chino y después en ingles y como solo entiendo español a la hora de usar google traductor las letras me van a cuenca y es con todos los capitulo

Smart MC ✅Ruthless MC✅Romance ✅Harem❌Past insecurities ✅Good Writting ✅Twisted MC ✅Rebirth life crisis ✅Therepy ✅Hidden 💎 ✅Goals, Ambitions, ❌

This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 16.This is a reversed transported to another world / reincarnated in another world story. It adds the extra spice of both characters involved in the transit retaining their memories, even though it seems to be one entity rather than two conflicting souls sharing one body.This is a story I'm sad to review, because the whole is less than the sum of the parts. Part by part it's a solid five stars all over, but when put together there are cracks in the picture.It all starts out as a campfire tale, the kind where you, the reader, have to envision yourself sitting at a campfire listening to a wizzened greybeard telling the tale of his youth.Sure there are tense errors that can't be chalked down to the taleteller wavering between the tale in the past and his comments about that past, but they're minor and don't disturb the flow.And it's all wonderfully told from that very special first person point of view.Then we have the transit.Suddenly story-snippets in third person point of view are inserted, and for me this is a big no-no. Deciding to run a story in first person allows the author some leeway when it comes to tenses. As an author you get close and personal with the reader, but it comes at the cost of a smaller world, one limited to what can be experienced by the narrator. Adding third person snippets is cheating.The world transited to isn't modern Earth. It's our far future. So kudos for a great setting. Fantasy land goes visiting space opera.Then things get horribly confusing. Flashbacks all over the place, long sections of third person narration just occasionally interspersed by what the main character experiences, back to the now, next flashback, back to the now, next flashback, and after I while I suffer from temporal car-sickness.Stars.Writing: Four stars. Near perfect langage accompanied by mixing first person and third person point of views randomly inserted in the story.Updates: Five stars. Perfect.Story: Three stars. Each and every single part is a rock solid five star chunk, but when joined together we have an unholy mess.Character: Five stars. No discussion. Superb characterisation.World: Five stars. Same here. Superb depiction of the setting, or in this case, settings.Lastly, this is a tale that should have been told straight for the sake of coherence, but readers should give it a chance, because as soon as the temporal chaos is taken care of you'll be reading one hell of a Sci-Fi story told in all but perfect native English where the very language used have a personality of its own.