Nobody Has It As Good As The Dead

Up until chapter 550 this is an acceptable novel after that the whole basis of the novel gets forgotten and the plot becomes an entirely different novel. My recomendation read until the doomsday mission is declared then drop it.

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Honest ReviewFound this one has potential, feels a lot like Sword Art Online.  (A very hard to read version of it.)The Good:  Character classes are unique and it is nice to see an MC that isn't 100% righteous for once.The Bad:  Hard to follow... it jumps around a lot with little to no indication.  I found the world setting kind of convoluted and some of the situations to be pointless.  It feels like a lot of this is filler content so far because I really only care about Shiro and people he interacts with.The Neutral:  Objectively describing someone as "sexy" leaves it open to interpretation, that's not a bad thing by itself, but who thinks it is sexy? (i.e. the observers, the characters, the readers, NPCs?)  Maybe I missed it, but why are they stuck in the world?Maybe add a note that senshi = warrior and the significance of it so people don't think "WTF are senshis?  Sounds like sushi!" or something like that. (Assuming that is what you meant it to be)Feel free to review back and I'll add you on Line if you would like editing help.

Bland MC, zero development in story, zero character build, everything is rushed, MC is a retarded idiot, writers writes bla bla bla instead of describing things, so yah pretty ****ty.sad thing is this would've been interesting if writer actually tried to writer instead of doing this ****

I read the other's review from the raw reader and "understood or misunderstood" something, and that is "The Mc has LOLI'S HARAM!" welp actually make me give a positive point for this story.😁 Don't mind me at all...Don't call me creeps...I just see the Loli's was so attractive, but not 3D...I'm just a degenerate who always likes 2D...

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"Normal thing to do ..."

"You do not look at her. You look at me. And if I so much as hear or see anything you do against her one more time." He picks her up, making her turn purple. "I will make sure you regret it," He lets her go, letting her fall to the floor while wheezing and coughing trying to get air in her lungs.