Myths Reborn, Dawn

Great book with lots of lovable characters and relationships

I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing.best of luck author san

Story progress so slow and boring  ........ Theres so much unecessary moment imo. But apreciate author posting it daily ,   3,4/5......................................

I absolutely love love this book and trauma team. I really hope you pick this back up soon.

This story isn't bad, but there are much better. If those who are reading have already tried Super Gene or Monster Pet Evolution let me warn you that this one is based in those 2 and probably Monster Paradise but can't confirm that. In this things that this writer is copying he tryed to make it seem different but he actually made a poor job trying to hide the similarities. And there wasn't much imagination to create better situations. That being said if the reader can handle this story until chapter 80, they will see some changes and will actually start liking the developments and the later arcs.Warnings: the writer has a clear problem with non standardized women. Always complaining on the "fat/muscular" lead girl.He creates a lot of dead-end and plot-holes. It kinda gets annoying sometimes. Then forgets to explain what happened to certain monsters the MC got and explains it 20 chapters later. Basicly there are some subjects that aren't really explored or have the attention they should have. Then it gets confusing when he explains them further when there are no connections with future situations.Positive points: the world building is actually good. It's the merge if 2 types of story that actually go well together so it has a lot of potencial.And the characters actually show developments and growth.Last statement, taking in consideration the release speed and the writing quality, I think it's shamefull that they turned this into a premium after chapter 100. The story had only started showing good qualities and they already implemented the paying system. It's a good way to say goodbye to the readers that actually managed to handle all the early bad writing and hang on until the good part started.

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Loving the story It's a common plot, but the storyline is what makes this interesting. It's also good to see the main character mature. The world-building is amazing and just add some new twist and it will be remarkable. #Loveit🎉🎉

You already know how shameless I am.Thank you for reading I know this is not my best work but I'll do my best.Extra chapters for powerstones:50 - 2 chapters100 - 5 chapters200 - 15 chapters