mysterious identity

third time reading the series !!  absolutely love every book !!!

Tbh it's an alright story. Very cringy in places tho. At some points, it makes it seem a bit more real but then instead of learning from it. It happens again and again. The main thing that is making me drop is the whole heaven, bad luck thing. I mean I get it I really do but you don't have to mention it and go on and on about it every single chapter. Plus it's used in the most random ways just to make you remember again that it is there. Like when he was chasing the bandits, It was funny. He was having fun. He was heading to the city anyway, and this is just fun on the way. But then it is made out that it was heaven affecting him??? WTF how??? how will chasing bandits along the road you already have to walk affect his cultivation or will? As long as he remembers his goal and strives for it, he can do whatever tf he wants. Just because he isn't moaning and complaining about it and isn't focusing on breaking free 24/7 doesn't mean it will weaken his will... It's honestly annoying to read about every chapter. Then you have how can heaven even atk him like these situations... It was made out very clearly that all heaven would do is not give him luck. Okay so in random situations it is always the worst case. SO how is heaven making him chase bandits? It shouldn't be able to do that...Plus, how will heaven even affect the mc's luck? We call it luck but luck shouldn't be a concept to heaven. Also, if the mc always had no luck then he wouldn't survive at all. Bad luck is like when he is cultivating something can go wrong and die. Never find love etc    It will be impossible for the mc to even live let alone cultivate. Also if heaven is fair why is it taking the luck of the family? It killing random people, animals etc trying to kill the mc. How would that be fair to the other people and animals???? It would be much better if heaven was made out to be a person. Cause then everyone saying heaven is fair is clearly lying cause it's not...

I read all 45 of the available chapters and, while it wasn't terrible, it also wasn't very impressive.Going in, I thought that the MC "inheriting the strongest account" would cause him to instantly be extremely powerful but... no. In reality, it just gives him a huge pile of resources and a million years of "accumulated cultivation" that he can use. The resources help him built up his sect (and the system missions he has gotten so far are also focused exclusively on building up the sect) while the "accumulated cultivation" can be used in small bursts to help him bypass the middle stages of each cultivation realm - but then he still gets bottlenecked before advancing a major realm like all other cultivators.So, while his golden finger gives him immense advantages in speed of cultivation, ultimately the author is walking the same tired path of having the MC slowly advance his cultivation realm by realm. Of course, almost every cultivation novel is like this so it's not a huge knock against the book. I was just somewhat expecting something different because of the title.As for the story itself, well there are only 45 chapters to review, but it also seems pretty bog-standard. The premise that MC is a sect master is good, because it forces MC to interact with other characters regularly, but it's also somewhat annoying when he attracts random hatred from a dozen different factions because of the baggage brought along by his disciples. For instance, his third disciple is a stereotypical jade-like beauty who is also secretly an abandoned princess, but then when MC uses his golden finger to awake her hidden bloodline (heh heh), the empire behind her jumps out to make trouble - sending a few batches of mooks to try to kill MC and bring the princess back. Coincidentally, each new batch of mooks is appropriately leveled to MCs own current level, each batch being strong enough to pressure MC, but weak enough for MC to defeat.And that's why I call the story bog-standard. The MC makes enemies for reasons at varying levels of contrivance, and those enemies are always stronger than MC, but not so much stronger than him that the situation seems completely hopeless. Then, there the same predictable song and dance where the enemies send out people to deal with MC over and over again, and each time the thugs are a bit stronger than MC, but MC can still beat them thanks to his OP main character cultivation techniques.Basically, all the foes in the book are just brain-dead mooks who extend their faces for MC to slap, then go back and call their grandpas to let MC slap those faces too.The only facet of the story that seems to have some potential for originality is the whole "sect building" part, but by chapter 45 MC only has 4 disciples and the sect is barely getting off the ground. Building a sect and being involved with various disciples and their problems could bring about some interesting story arcs and character-building moments in theory, but at this point, it's still too early to say.tl;dr: All I've seen in the first 45 chapters is a very generic cultivation novel. If more chapters come out, I will probably read them to see if things improve.

Website : qidian china Views : 3.12 million Rating : 8.3(973) Chapters : 648 Status : ongoingrank : 23Word count : 2.08 millionauthor rank : great

Spoiler Alert:Chap 137-138Gets an item from the game to turn invisible. Save a neighbor girl from 2 armed assassins.That same day, author wrote love this and love that then they sealed the deal in bed.Wow.Anyways, a major turn down for me. Decided to quit reading it. Not much development, just a guy fast lvling usng cheat monsters.The author mish mashed the contents trying to make it emotional, mysterious and funny but failed. It's too fast paced for its own good it cant maintain a good storyline.No parents.Sick sister.In debt.A broken gaming helmet.An op ingame cheat.Easy money. Millions to Billions. Beats the military and other secret organizations in the missions of the game.Writer under estimates the military too much.They can check your bank accts. especially that you made millions of money and that you are not yet a bonafide citizen of a high end energy city. You're from the slums.It was good at first, can tolerate it. But the addition of secret police/military/organization in a somewhat light hearted storyline, gehhhh.the additional of very fast romance is gehhhhh.the addition of making virtual iyems real is gehhh..this is considering the fact that the vmmorpg is not yet fully developed to the point that it's passable as a game that adheres to 100% reality.gehhjj...I'd say a letdown after the first 100 chapters. it has potential but mehh.

except for the story being a bit slow everything's great

I enjoy reading it....but yeah that's that...I wonder if the mc include legal/illegal loli?? hahaha anyway I think its better if the copy skill include a function like  erase or just replace other skill not add a limited one?

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