My Watch System

Hope you like the journey until now guys.The Second Volume is going to end soon. Make sure to read it and comment.I appreciate all the comments presented by the readers which helped me edit my novel to a more readable piece of art.I have done the grammar edit for the first set of chapters. More are coming. make sure you stick with the novel.

Some idiots are reviewing without reading to boost the review rating. The rest of the novel after chapter 1 isn't even the same story. Either that or this author is just so bad at writing that they messed up.

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Hello guy's/girl's and whoever else is out there, I writing a review in hopes that this novel gets more attention, so far the story has been hilariously funny, at the same time it's been making me rage and cry in anger at the same time, the characters in the story especially the goddess has been trolling the mc since the beginning of the story, it's gotten so bad that even a coldblooded killer couldn't help be feel sorry for him, but of course that doesn't stop the goddess from giving him thorny early birthday gifts. But that's not all this story has to offer, so far the character design/development has been outstanding Rika, Orthis(i'm not sure i spelled his name right), Risa, and Sahria, has had the most character development so far, I've read far enough to read to a recent chapter where it looks like the love interest has appeared (this may go down the Yuri route after all, i mean he's still is a man at heart). The only thing it leads a little more of, is the world building, I have heard a little bit about what happened in the world, such as to why the racism between beastkin, and humans are so bad, but I have yet to get a general layout  of the world on a Large scale view, such as to what kingdom, fiefdom, or area of the world he(she) currently lives in, or is whether or not that town is the only one that treats the beastkin like slaves or is it on a International scale. other than that, you can honestly say this novel has little to no flaws, and I'm really/seriously/honestly/hopefully looking forward to more chapters in the future.

why isn't this on the fanfic section.also a good fanfic if you wanna read.

I'm not one to usually enjoy Sci-fi stories, but this one took me by the hands with the character design and the plot surrounding it. I'm excited to uncover more.

NGL, you got me hooked to the point that I wanna read this all day. But after seeing the latest update, is this dropped?

great story.had fun while reading. very enjoyable.must read.in my all time favorite story. cool MC. and different type of story then classic storys.