Outstanding Introduction to Characters, Zero Grammar mistakes, Strong-spirited female mc, arrogant yet dashing male detective. since the start of the first chapter I haven't stopped reading until I reached chapter 4 just to give this positive review. I haven't read any much Thriller but this sure packed a punch to my mind, Keep up the good work, your novel is amazing
I started reading this Story because author says it is a meme novel. First 10-20 chapter are actually pretty funny, but that's pretty much gone after that. Don't see any difference between this story and any other isekai system cultivation novel.
I usually dislike novels where they do a needlessly long piece of why so and so is re-incarnating, going back in time or some such. However, this is the correct way of beginning with the past, all the relevant content, betrayal and in a single chapter. For one, this story is made of my favorite tropes, so I could only like it... that said, the writing definitely picks up from second chapter, and it's easy to read and entertaining. One could almost see what's happening in the minds-eye. Well done. I think I found a keeper... How about you?
Greatest experience I've ever earned in my years, generations, decades and centuries of life. Webnovel should consider this work of fiction a total and pure art with great message and public support.
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The first thing I notice when reading this Novel, is that the first few chapters of the story introduce a lot of characters at once, which was a little overwhelming at the moment, but slowly you start to get who is who from the abundance of dialogue. The characters do need some development with descriptions, but other than that, fun to imagine what they look like! Same goes for the background of the scenario, more describing but has a general idea on where the story is taking place. The grammar in this story and the overall structure needs some work, but the Author does have a compelling hook that draws the reader into a festive atmosphere. It looks like the Author has a reasonable amount of dialogue between the characters. Dialogue is important to a story and this book has it down!I encourage the Author to practice editing the chapters before releasing them to lessen grammatical errors and possibly filling the chapters a bit more with description. Other than that, I wish them luck with future chaps and votes!
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