At a time where Egypt was considered the most powerful kingdom, a young Pharaoh and a powerful Monarch gained fame through his victories at war and the ability to maintain peace with the surrounding tribes. The more wars he won, the more consorts were offered to his harem but he never got physically intimate with any one of them. Thousands of his consorts were dying to get a glimpse of the man to whom they were offered but all their efforts were in vain.
But the whole story changes when this ruthless Pharaoh Ramses II meets a girl from a rural area of Egypt and falls in love with her at first sight. This lucky girl Nefertari eventually becomes his Great Royal Wife but their happily ever after is shortened by a heart wrenching conspiracy that was sprouted from the jealousy of some powerful consorts.
How will this story unfold? Will Ramses and Nefertari be able to overcome the piling hurdles in their relationship or will the rage of Ramses break Nefertari to a point beyond repair? Will their love prevail?
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Can't wait to read more as I presume this might be the type of story where everything will slowly reveal itself through the course of time.
Would recommend to readers of any caliber, since I am not a into the romance genre this still caught my attention. Please keep writing author.
It is a good story for readers who lije stiff like this. Your writing is good and interesting, although you have grammar mistakes that need to be fixed(dialogue and the big spaces you have between the commas). Break up your paragraphs a little, too.
Other than that I seen no other problems, your character building is good and the ones who like stories like this, will enjoy it.
Keep up the good work!
Brewing romance in the middle of misunderstanding, very interesting.
Overall Review: Very interesting story, the characters are well built and the plot isn't rushed. You can just imagine the story in your head as you read the words and images will unfold with the description... anyways that's what happens for me when I read a good book ;) just like a movie!
Suggestion: Few paragraphs are too long so you can break them into smaller ones for better readability.
Kudos. :)
An interesting romance!
The story is of high quality; it flows wonderfully smooth. The grammar is on point. It describes the characters interestingly and the plot of the story is intriguing. So far it only has 7 chapters, and it definitely has got everything right.
Well done!