Starts interesting enough with the first 100 or so chapters being the story of a young boy that goes to a military academy and is on his way to becoming a soldier. Then makes an abrupt turn and spends the next 100 or so chapters focusing on passionate young love that prevails against all challenges. They know each-other only two weeks before their love reaches an unshakeable level, more passionate, true and free and hones than any love that's ever loved. Oh, and the MC is a martial genius, prodigy and the one to always save the day with everyone else just a pale shadow of his magnificence. Well, its not quite as bad as that but you get the idea.Most annoying is how the story turned from being a soft military fantasy to being a romantic fantasy. Its not badly written, but its also not what I started reading.
This might be the very first R18 novel that I read with very good story development unlike other R18 novels where MC only use his second head from beginning till the ending of the novel. You will not get tired of reading this novel because there's always interesting way of R18 scene that author used. Very awesome work. Thx for this novel. I like it.
mc uses his clone to fk girls so hes cucked by his clones................................................................................................
Uh not a very proper review but I'll try. ((I have read up to chapter 23)).At first, it starts good, but then the mc kinda becomes overpowered I guess. The characters are pretty 1 dimensional. The system isn't really that cheat-like from what I've seen because if the mc isn't aware of something, it isn't shown in the system so it feels like instead of the system being a golden finger for the mc, it's more like the system is a manifestation of his subconscious and biconscious, which also aids his evolution.I like how he gets some pets, but too many pets make them feel less special. The fact that mc is reluctant to kill humans but beat animals into submission, doesn't leave the best taste in my mouth considering the mc described humans as xenophobic when he himself wishes to avoid killing humans to the point where he uses up Evo points to make a whole freaking skill.His innate powers like life essence in his roots, soul nurturing, and other stuff makes me wonder if the other willows were to cultivate wouldn't they also have some of those properties? Because there isn't really a proper explanation, he just kinda has it. Would make sense if mc discovers some type of energy, condenses some nutrients in his roots, or absorbs some souls and refines them, giving him some sort of soul property. But no, he just somehow has them and it is attributed to him having a system?Also about that system part, after he finds out about his life essence condensation attribute, it finally shows up on the system but why is it that he knows about the fox? The spirit and the names of the two village girls? It would make sense if that was more explained as mc himself said that it won't show on the system panel if he doesn't know the name..That was structured weird ah, sorry.Apparently the raw is 从柳树开始进化 but it's different. I myself dislike it because though the mc starts off a willow tree he doesn't get to stay like that and gains a human form early on. so yeah, if you like the plant mc where they photosynthesize and stuff then I don't really recommend the raw..Oh heck that was long I-
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Mia-san went to change in her room as Oneka-senpai showed me around my room. It was huge! Much larger than my entire apartment. The walls were a greenish-blue color, unlike senpai's pink room. There was a King-sized bed at the corner, a table, and even a flat screen TV. There was a bathroom for each room which was connected by doors.
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