My Ex-Girlfriend Was Appointed as a Knight Commander

I usually don't comment this early, but the NU page for this particular story deserves a better rating than it currently has. For now, I'll give it a 4, as it certainly doesn't warrant the numerous 1-star ratings.

The story itself, despite being only 23 chapters in, has caught my interest. The setting is intriguing, and there are some emotionally charged moments. However, these dramatic scenes stem from misunderstandings and poor communication. A significant portion of the early conflicts revolves around the main character's lack of interaction with his ex, considering their complicated history.

I find the two female leads appealing, and based on the harem ending mentioned by another reviewer, I'm open to the concept. Although I disagree with their assessment of the ex, I must admit I've enjoyed their presence so far. It could still get worse, as I'm not up-to-date, but for now, it's satisfactory.

My main issue lies with the backstory, particularly a flashback around chapter 20. Here's where the plot hole arises: the protagonist is manipulated and cursed by the FL's malicious parent and a conniving lord. The plan is well-crafted, but it doesn't make sense given the situation. Since the protagonist is already cursed and his future is ruined, they hold no leverage. He could easily expose their treachery and bring down their scheme, which is a serious crime against the crown. Yet, inexplicably, he complies.

This reaction baffles me, and it feels like a convenient plot device. Despite that glaring inconsistency, I appreciate the emotional undertones between the main character and his ex, the camaraderie with his mage friend (who might be a strong harem contender), and the combination of knights, magic, and aura. The setting is also appealing.

In conclusion, the story isn't flawless, but it's not deserving of the low ratings it's received either. There's potential for a compelling narrative if the plot holes are addressed or explained satisfactorily.

The novel initially has a promising start, exploring the emotional consequences of first love leading to impulsive decisions. However, as the plot unfolds, the irrational choices persist, despite the potential for more sensible approaches. The story becomes repetitive, with characters seemingly disregarding common sense for the sake of a contrived plot progression.

The narrative eventually devolves into a predictable harem trope, with every female character introduced developing romantic feelings for the protagonist, and their thoughts centering around his attractiveness. Unfortunately, even the supporting female characters, aside from the knight commander, are reduced to mere pawns in the harem setup, despite having some character development that could be meaningful.

The main character's lack of growth and illogical power progression are glaring issues. He wasn't initially skilled in magic or swordsmanship, and his abilities were suppressed post-knight academy. Yet, inexplicably, he suddenly becomes a formidable force, defeating top knights and winning prestigious contests.

In summary, the novel begins with a solid foundation but loses its way due to illogical decisions and a reliance on clichéd harem dynamics, ultimately sacrificing substance for an unsatisfying conclusion.

Why is the author going round in circles repeating the same things? I thought this was a good book but now I don't think so. Are we going to see O'Dell and Tara getting back together for the umpteenth time? ...