"I know you are inexperienced... but I will tell you what to do. Your only job is to follow instructions. Open your mouth." As she listened she felt her breath hitch and her chest tighten nervously. She had wondered about sexual intimacy of course, had had her moments of curiosity about what it would be like, but now, in such circumstances, with a creature who had fed on her very life.. she swallowed, nervously casting her eyes about the room. She felt a stirring within her, a desire to know more, to feel more and experience more, but it was tempered with fear and confused by pain. The moments passed in silence before he tapped her cheek gently, his voice a low growl of impatience.
I've just finished the first 50 chapters and I'm loving this novel. The writing quality is good, the flow is harmonious and many of the characters are endearing. The dialogues are well made and the descriptions are on point. I've got no complaints and would like more people to give this story a chance and enjoy it.
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