Okay, so my review is going to be spoiler heavy since there are few things I’d like clear up.1. “I Can Pick Up Powers From The Novels I Plagiarized”I have to honestly ask if we’re reading the same novel or not? All the stories he’s uploaded to the Evil God site are of his own creation. The first story about the golden finger was one he had written for an ero novel website, but because it was too graphic it was banned.The second story he uploaded, was one he created based on previous trends and to further his understanding of the site and the benefits it provides to its authors at each level. And the third story was once again a story he had written in the past during the time when the doctor sub-genre was trending.2. This novel had devolved into standard wish fulfillment.I can’t say that the person who made this comment is wrong, but if you were looking for anything more, then I have to say you’re in the wrong place — 99.9% of the novels on this website, be it the ones aimed at male or female readers, have some sort of wish fulfillment. They’re not the same kind of wish fulfillment, but they’re wish fulfillment nonetheless. And that’s okay. It’s why we read these novels in the first place; something to distract us from the slogs of our daily lives. The only real criticism for this novel I can think of is that the author over describes things. I have no idea how to close this review, but all I’ll say is that the concept is interesting, the writing is fairly decent, and the translation is surprisingly good — do give it a shot.
It is a decent novel up till you reach the point where he starts bending over to please some unreasonable females I mean he almost took a fireball to the face which attracted a boar which he then had to dodge and his reaction is a mild argument before handing equipment to the cause of it
I read this on royal road. Saw he transmigrated to here. Lol. Writing grammar is raw...but good imagination and entertaining overall. I figure with a dedicated editor he would do much better. Do give this a read. Just bear with the writing grammar.
I really enjoyed this story. Which is rare, when there harem elements. I wish you'd continue with this book. Not enjoying the new Harvest Dungeon anywhere near as much.
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