Pretty good novel, but it gradually gets more complicated and messy, then it gets even more messy as it tries to resolve some of the mess/plot holes/complaints. The author definitely puts a lot of thought and effort into the novel and looks at comments and feedback, but tries to do too much and eventually got lost in all of the stuff they were trying to juggle at once. Maybe I'm being too quick to drop it, but I skimmed some chapters to try and get past this filler/mess to get back to the good story, but it never did. Dropped on ch 279
Fun story so far. I hope the chapters continue coming out without delay :-)--------Fun story so far. I hope the chapters continue coming out without delay :-)
We do have a very interesting story here, going from games to cultivating directly. One of the only issues I found was in the loss of punctuation with run on sentences. Rob is interesting to follow but the character in game names is down right strange at times, for example one of his friends is called nohair as a joke and then it happens that he loses his hair. . . Ok. Very good story overall though and no overpowered or broken people yet. Good read can’t wait for more chapters.
NICE BOOK!! Really like this author's writing style. This is a good story, and I will follow this one. Spending 30 mins ti read this book won't let you down.
BROOO, I love the way you write. It has a very smooth and unique flow. You got loads of talents. Keep writing. Your story has the drama, the intensity, basically anything a reader will ask.
The story is really good really touched my heart. With beautiful descriptions and imagery, it is almost like a heart touching poem with plot. It isn't like the other novels that I have read so this made me really appreciate this novel. Would love to see more
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