it's amazing...you won't even realised which chapter you are reading coz u I'll be so absorbed in the novel....I have only one issue, PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT INTO HAREM. Love should be Monogamous
Awesome story, I’ve binged it over the last few days and must say that this is one of the best novels I’ve read so far. Shoutout to the author who delivers such a masterpiece for free
My review matches Kage36Aldarion. I found the premise excellent. The characters are likable and relatable. But the inconsistent world building, non-existent survival logic, abuse of the system for everything, having satellites survive a solar flare, and having no seed stock to start with despite six months to prepare and many more illogical premises ruin the general story for me.Finally the story got too ruined for me within the first chapters with the major plot hole when he first gets back from being interrogated he has Internet Connection running at his lair despite his local satellite receiver Core he made having being stolen. The story has too harsh of lags in continuity that ruin it for me. I couldn't convince myself to keep paying for chapters after I had to spend coins on them after chapter 20.Good novel idea. Needs rewritten with editorial input and a physics/astronomers advice for hard sci-fi! Hard Sci-Fi is a demanding genre. Not easy, as you need to make a full database and writing bible for all the rule modifications in your world to maintain story continuity.
Yeah, I agree. The grammar is lacking, but the flow of the story is good. This is one of the stories I'm still reading so far. I hope you continue to do your best, Author!
Like it so far, keeping an eye on it. Just don't drop this. Need more sports novels that actually make it past 100 chapters, tired of dumbed down martial arts novels
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