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The manor was fitting for a son of the royal family; grand and luxurious with no expenses spared when decorating the oat wood rooms, beautiful fountains in the courtyard with a few herb maidens gardening and making sure the garden was beautifully decorated.
"It is a must for the human race, as it destroys the limits of humanity, elevating them into Godhood." " Well, almost" - thought to myself as I fainted again. Technicalities...
"I will merge both of my creations in sake of your power. They will turn into Nova Demons. Then it will be your turn to merge with them." He said with no expression whatsoever. I am pretty scared for I may turn into these ugly demons.
The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.
So far good and It's your first novel. I guess you're trying to maintain the hero mysterious that's why everywhere hero is always mentioned as 'he'. But i think i got the reason in chapter 10. About hindu god's inclusion I'm not sure and it's my first time reading a novel such as this. Guess I'll find out as the story progresses. Your world is also a little unique and also seems vast since it's a fantasy world with magic as mages levels are introduced, it also has monsters, god's and kingdoms as you mentioned. Keep going i feel this has great potential. Hope you update more frequently.
I love this novel every single thing in the novel is amazing it's a great novel I recommend to people who love adventures and slice of life Good job author 👍
I love how you can expand to another story for this universe. Your writing is great and your story has peaked my interest. Hope you can keep updating the story frequently 😁.
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