Seriously this book needs an editor. The writing quality is worst. Comparable to an mtl.In the bigining story devolved very fast. It needs more details to engage the audience. It felt like reading a manual.2nd chapter is unique in a way and is the best way to convay the mc's plans. Hope to see that more.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 22.49millionRating : 8.8(504)Chapters : 950+approxStatus : completed Word count : 2.15million author level : lv5 No of works : 2Disscussion : 110399Year started : 2017Chinese title : 系统的黑科技网吧Guys my current favorite novel is "Beautiful Time With You". It's one of the best romance novels I ever read!I know many of you might be hesitating cuz it's Ye Fei Ye novel! I can understand that! But I promise you it's a very cute and prolly the funniest novel with like zero heart wrenching moments! Give it a try guys!MC is very different and also super surprising thing is ML isn't a complete jerk!
i have read this novel in the mtl, guess what? author eventually makes the con and useless side character become the real powerhouse, i just want to say, this is not the direction that i want to read
really good I want to keep reading but I cant cuz no more chapters have been released. love the character design of it, the background. just wondering when more chapters will be released.
You really need a goddamn proofreader... The novel is fine as is, but I’m finding at least 4 mistakes every chapter. Some aren’t bad, while there are those that make me cringe...
This story is a consistency nightmare. Mc is generic unnaturally weak loser who becomes op due to cheat and then becomes a loner because of fear of jealousy. let's ignore all the team led by the barely adequate c ranks working hard to survive and having people. Revealing your power will absolutely cause isolation and not dependency. it's not like being a loner is always the source of bullying.This has a game system a as powerlevels and strict time limits. However it does not explain what those numbers mean at all and fails hard at keeping track of them. he also has a growth ability with assaingable points he never seems to assign. ten points in everything let's him effortlessly body the basic monsters. however when he fights a monster with almost double the strength it has he can't go heads up or make telling wounds? he also sleeps in the wild despite the novice zones being talked up which is terrible narratively. finally he has ten days to level ten to not die but he's only level one on the fourth day where dudes in groups are level three two days ago.
this kinda looks good, probably there will be humor while having hide and seek kinda remind me of Manhua "My wife is the empress". I have high hopes for this story rooting for it to be chosen!
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