Searching for a mirror she suddenly saw it on the left side of the bed. Staring back at her was young budding girl around 14 years Old. With her dark wavy hair, big brown eyes and those skin that as white as a snow. Is that me? what the heck? was i this beautiful when i was young i truly dont remember with all the raggs that shes been wearing.
Some arrogant nobles looked on scared shitless, yet trying to hide it with a sneer as if looking down on Adrian. Adrian could feel their gazes as he surveyed the crowd smiling a viscous smile sending shivers down many spines and turning the nobles sneers into scared looks.
"It's not going to happen. Not unless I want to spend the rest of my life in that underground cell. From what I can see, you're the one who has the least to lose." She whimpers, and he withdraws his hands. "Sorry, I know that's your life in there. None of this feels right, does it?"
it is good, but my problem with it is that you Created a race, I know that it is powerful, but it does not make sense that you made them have few people because It is a race, and it should have more members not few, And you made it harder to recruit than other races. It is a territory, and it cannot just have a few people defending it. From what I can see, it doesn't look like this novel will go far. It looks like it would be dropped at one point because the word view has collapsed.
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