Midnight Thriller Station: A Collection of Gripping Short Stories

Very interesting. I enjoyed reading it, cnt wait for part two

Well as I was reading ist I got a mega headache, there are brainless people left and right and so on I like the genre but this novel is the worst I have read so far.

Good story but mc is a complete idiot.  Dies, goes back in time with knowledge to prevent a horrible future.  Does very little to stop it.  Has amazing powers but uses them like a tool.  Has soooo many chances to fix the future but like an idiot, only does the bare minimum to save his own family.  But does a horrible job at it

This story progresses well, the only flaw which, I would say, needs improving was the author's writing quality. The author highlights the narrative with the use of many adjectives, this, in itself is fine, however these adjectives have not been used to their full capacity which in turn makes the read slightly cliche and annoying. This is aided with the use of 'pointing out the obvious'. For example, "it was a scene almost everyone had gotten used to as it happens quite often" - the reader already knows that it happening frequently is how everyone had gotten used to it, there is no need to clarify. The constant clarification and not leaving things to the reader's imagination takes the enjoyment and thrill out of reading such works of art, and thus makes them bored; and for the author, it is harder for them to create dramatic twists and turns in their plot. I would also suggest to go back and read through the grammar again to spot the small errors which need refining.I am aware that this may be a lot to take in for the author, and I do apologise if it is. The writing and plot were well, the author has potential, so please do not be disheartended, there were only very small corrections which need to be made.

Just an extremely biased review from the Author here take no notice but here is a book I'm creating and I hope that you guys like it though 1 chap there will be more in the future Adios my amigos and i hope you have quite the adventure as you follow our Main character Autry Gregson and his friend Shawn Malory

Truly amazing of a book! The first chapter was indeed amazing and got me hooked in easily. Do your best to write more chapters for us next time, can't wait.

"Whats wrong caster?" Shirou asked.

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