I'm not going to be an shameless author, but I think I did good with this. So I hope whoever reads this enjoys it, and if you don't tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it.
It's a good book. I like the fact that the power doesn't change but the mc has to think of ways to use it effectively. The characters tho they feel 2d dimensional most of the time but there are good bases for good character writing here. World background is something I am more interested in it's very subtle but it's working I guess.
Dear readers, hello. I am now resuming the updates for this book. Before that, I have made some adjustments and modifications to parts of the plot. The specific changes are as follows:1. The level of the pact between Alexander and Laura has been changed from 200 to 1000.2. The form of the Turkey has been adjusted from a dragon to a thunderbird.3. The name of the top structure in the City of Hope has been changed.4. Alexander additionally acquires a pair of very powerful eyes.5. Karu forges a sword for Alexander, but only completes half of it.6. Some character names have been adjusted and unified.7. Clichés have been removed to make the reading more fluid.
New players are given three Life Stones each in-game day until they reach level 10 or somehow receives an Elite-Grade equipment. After that, every players are only given one Life Stone every 24 in-game hours[6] that they're online. As if to pour salt on a wound, these Life Stones are soul-bound, untradeable, isn't for sale even for real money[7] and expires in 96 in-game hours including the time when the players aren't online. Some players could play and never keep a Life Stone in any one time. Indeed the lack of Life Stones would certainly make anyone, especially someone like a guild master hesitate to do any kind of Deathmatch[8].
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