Meera The Alien

Really worthwhile read, the author just needs to check he gets the right gender (she/he) a couple of times but apart from that there’s no glaring translation errors. The story is entertaining and a fresh take on the disciple/template trope which doesn’t become boring after the first 10-15 chapters. The MC is a little bland and low key but that doesn’t mean he accepts bullying in his normal life he will use his disciples to take revenge on people that have slighted or attacked him before. His disciples chatacter building is a little shallow but I expect that as more chapters get released and they get more story time that they will be fleshed out some more and made more interesting. So far definitely one of the better options to vote for.

it was trash, author repeats words really often, for some reason he loves this woman who is meant to be his mother who he has spent 3 days with and is already basing his future plans around her, for some reason he "doesn't know what the sacred mark actually is" and loads of other basic **** when his dad used to be one of the 9 emperors who ruled kunlun, he gets into arguments and cares WAYYYYY to much about the queen and 8th prince, when his old status was sooooo much higher than them that theirs no reason he should care about them so much they are his motivation to improve

to be honest I think this might be something created from the novel astral pet storeI like that novel and since the author is different might as well treat it as a completely different one....we never know maybe this one might become better than astral pet store novel

All five for now as its just getting started.based on the twenty chapters, I can see hints of astral petstore, and other beast taming genre novels.

All this person as basically done is go to the ben 10 Wikipedia and copy all the episodes plots for each chapter. A blatant copy of the original work.

I am enjoying the direction it is going. But I'm not to sure about the plot. The character seems really OP and nothing can really stop him so it just seems predictable.

Hi! Author here.If you have anything to say about my work, critique it freely as that's what I'm looking for in my growth as an author. It will also be mirrored in Valor's adventure as he tries to obtain his dreams.

Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!