This story is one of the more interesting ones released for this trial batch. To be honest, I’m a sucker for beast taming stories and this is one of the more interesting ones. It’s got a unique premise that kept me interested after getting past the slow pacing in the beginning and the world building is pretty good. You can definitely tell that the author put some serious thought into the world. I also like how the MC’s power isn’t OP. It comes with some very reasonable limitations.That being said, there are some flaws with this story:1. The classic blasé attitude the MC has when they realize they’ve transmigrated. This is a huge pet peeve of mine as I don’t think it’s a realistic reaction no matter how many transmigration stories they read in their past life. 🙄2. Random emojis in the story. I’ve seen this in a few stories and I think it’s just lazy.3. Lack of consistency—the author seems to have trouble keeping track of what level certain skills should be and keeps flip flopping between proficient and expert. Not being able to keep track of details like this seems to be a common issue with stories. This really drove me crazy when I was reading. It should not be that hard to keep it consistent.4. Some occasional bad grammar, but it doesn’t happen often, thankfully.But despite the flaws, I enjoyed reading it and I would recommend it if you like beast taming stories.
Possibly the most disappointing novel I’ve ever voted for. Confusing and boring is how I would describe it. Half the chapter is spent on describing every treasure he has, why it’s important, and what it can do. I can’t even tell if there’s a plot underneath all this description. Absolutely no hook to make me want to read more, no motivation for the main character, no reason to care about his previous life, and no interesting world building. Seems more like a rough draft or an idea chart than an actual story. Maybe it’s the translation from Chinese to English, or maybe it appeals more to Chinese culture, all I know is I don’t like it
it is a very very good novel.But I have flashbacks about "My Great Demon System".....both has their sides that is for sure. Brutallity is the "My Great demon System" and demon like. the oposite this novel!!!
this is a rare breed of books that's both takes the time it needs and doesn't spend 100 ch wasting time I love that attention was put on the world building that makes sense plot is really good with the conflict with each faction makes sense it's just a really satisfying read
interesting, albeit slightly flawed read. Steve includes the good and the bad. The flaw is including crude stories including one where a waitress flashes him her chest only covered with whipped cream. That simply serves no purpose besides shock value.A strength is his inclusion of specifics about the restaurant business. Most authors do not include hard operating numbers and advice in a narrative book. He does and it is extremely useful information. I found those details are comparable in less words to books I have read devoted entirely to running the business.He nails it on the head when talking about going the extra mile for your guests. His philosophy and stories reminded me of Nordstrom’s commitment to unexpected service, even when it is not even related to the core business.Summary: Worth the read. Great for the business details and advice.
Now practising this new technique the energy spread throughout his body, and his mothers, started gathering in his heart, cycling through each and every part of his body. The impurities in his body being cleansed with each cycle and the points in his body becoming opened with each cycle.
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