Well the book seems nice, I give this much on first glance, I may change it later. The writing quality though... i mean it's grammatically accurate and seems well thought out but the style lacks a bit. it's time concept is faster than normal but no problem, but it is lacking a narrative element and is a bit bland, it seems like the dialogue is monotone and how there's a lack of proper overview perspective needs more focus and there... you get the point.
but hey! writing is hard! just don't give up i look forward to your work
the story line is good but u need to keep the book/ chapters short .. you can complete the book by hving 50 chapters only...if u hve got more than 100 chapters them sometime PPL dnt read the whole book...just leave in half
Girl, you are bursting my head. Death Lord oo, Ella will not kill me. I cannot wait for him to be hopelessly in love so I can give him a cute pet name.
i read through some initial chapters and alr find out about 60 slaps. oh wow,odell is really the most abusive bas**rd in all of these kind of stories i read so far. not only that, there seems to be john mention in reviews. i guess ill stop reading it fearing my blood pressure will go up coz of anger
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but hey! writing is hard! just don't give up i look forward to your work
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