Mars the God of War and Agriculture

this book is quiet interesting and I love it. can't wait for more

The Base concept of the novel has a decent line for the story. The troubles Start with the Author's lack of knowledge about the location written about. He makes the setting in the United States but doesn't have the back ground for the things talked about. The SAT exam is a multiple choice test taken for college entrance. This test is scored with a numerical grade without any letters of A+ through F. The grading is not done by teachers but is scanned by machine. The scores are not announced publicly but are either mailed or E-mailed to the participants.wechat is not used by mainstream populace. While I will give the author props for writing this, I hope you take the criticism of checking the details about your content better.     

does the protagonist say he follows the path of evil? compare him and the mc of reverend insanity or wmw.this novel has absolutely nothing creative and innovative, it is like reading any other novel. the author just added a little '' sex '', '' evil '' and some bs, to create an illusion that this novel is different from the others. this protagonist is by no means intelligent and rational, he does not seem to think what can happen in the future because of his decisions and any treasure, skill ... it is all luck. another very irritating situation is the fact that if an enemy is a woman, there will probably be several situations where the protagonist will start to have some feeling for her. although she previously tried to kill him or capture him, everything in the end seems to be irrelevant because she is a woman.

Hello it is my first time writing so i would appreciate any support and criticism. I will try to update as much as possible. Thanks for reading my novel.

I really like the story so far i think it has a really good background good plot and has alot of potential to become a really good story i just need more chapters man lol

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