okay so basically i literally read 3 of your stories and they are great for a harem fan like me . Also this story is going awesome i literally love everything and every-shit that's in there (200 chapters in ) i hope you keep tian overpowered cuz in many novels at first mc is overpowered and then gets nerfed afterwards when they go to higher realms i hope you don't do that and yeah please break the fourth wall more often i loved that in that douluo dalu fanfic ( and idk why you stopped writing it :( ...) whatever keep going on fellow man of culture . also more MILFs please
The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site.The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something.This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.
One of the best Monster-MC novels. The pacing of the story is very good. I love how the MC evolves not only in body, but also in mind. He slowly starts having individual thoughts.While writing this review, I realized that the author also wrote an overlord FF that happens to be one of my favorite. Hope this story gets even more famous!!
The memories that were in his head took some time for him to organize and understand. The memories consisted of 4 things: Divine Astral Meridians, The Elephant Star Cultivation Technique, the Divine Elephant of Thunder and Flames Soul, and Xie Tian's bloodline.
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