Male Inferiority and Female Supremacy in the World of Immortal Cultivation

.........................................................................................................................................................................................The level of novels presented on the site has deteriorated. Sub-standard novels are chosen to be translated. This is a good novel, but I do not think that it will be selected.

Out of order chapters. Ripped straight from another site.                                                                                                                                          

its just bad...most ff are better than this.....................................................................................................

Peltivierre makes the daring choice to kick of this series with action at the start instead of a more subtle character introduction scene.  Since there are so many elements to introduce in the beginning, showing the story by narrating how the MC became a hunter may have been a more effective way to gather the interest of the readers.  Unfortunately even after starting the series, the chapters only consist of non-stop action from chapter to chapter instead of focusing anything on character-building, world-building, or story development.There are a number of grammatical errors where past and present tense are mixed up, which is quite jarring.  There are also some instances of throwing in future tense as well.One way to improve this series would be to incorporate more imagery, describing the various sensations the MC is feeling.  It would also help to describe his emotions and feelings in detail, so readers could connect to him more.Since the MC spends a lot of time, more detail could go into describing survival in the wilderness.  Thus far, it’s heavily glossed over.Although this series starts up decently, it quickly comes to show it has nothing but action to substantiate it.  I don't know how it changes later on, but it lacks a lot of substance.

Wow! I liked it alot! The characters feel *real*. Looking forward to reading more, and would recommend anyone who likes military, sci-fi or futuristic worlds to pick it up.Their lives feel full and kind of remind me of watching a movie - but one that I can't quite place. The pacing is gradual, fleshing out the history and surrounding world - can't wait for more! Only problem is... only 4 chapters? And it stops just when it's getting exciting :(

‘It’s not that it’s completely impossible that it was just a coincidence, but this is just way too coincidental!

it was then a 600 huge giants came out

Wang Lie noticed Yao Ji peculiar expression and started to suspect something. Her eyes widened at a specific thought and shook her head.