Making Money Just By Breathing

Why was this novel released when the winner wasn't. The story is mediocre compared to the first and third stories. So who decided this story won? Fix it.

Story just contradicts itself every other paragraph,one chapter his control has increased . next chapter his control has fallenone chapter his Qi is pure . next chapter it's muddy .one chapter he wants to do X . next chapter doing X is just out of the question .one chapter he gets an inheritance . next chapter it's too bothersome to actually read it .

A great story, interesting characters, a lot of great background and it’s hard to put it down even for a non gamer. Excellent work, makes you want to learn more about Greek mythology

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The "Dragon Kingdom" and "Free Kingdom" have me really intrigued. We know in lazy writing like this what they 'represent' lol. MC seems to be have a English name too so lets see how that works!

Great blend of different elements and story line, webnovel has been needing a fresh new interesting manga and this delivers can't wait for the next updates.

This is so incredibly bad. To be completely fair, based on the writing level and language, I think the author is a teenager. Good for him or her for deciding to write something and sticking with it, but it's really rough. The dialogue is soulless and every time I read it I can't help but picture an emotionless robot speaking it. The romance aspect is... how can I say this? It's like what a edge loner imagines is cool. One of the MCs names changed to something completely different halfway though for no reason, a couple times other MCs would be referred to as completely different names out of nowhere. Sometimes the author forgets basic things about a character and/or attributes something to one character that applies to another character. For example, one MC has an AI named Noah, and a couple times the author has a different character talking to Noah, even though that character has never met nor do they know Noah exists.It's just really not good. I read all the current chapters because I had a lot of time to kill and frankly because it was like watching a train wreck - I couldn't look away.

Tbh I cant grab system...But this novel really has unique plot. Rhe writing tells itself how beautifully the author has given his interest to this plot. More power to you. Best of luck in advance