The story is good but the translation need editing. There are grammar errors every chapter making some sentences really hard to understand. The quality is better than MTL but the errors make it hard to really enjoy the story.I occasionally saw people commented in the chapters about the errors but so far non has been fixed
Ngl, I don't read cultivation stuff much so don't expect an expert review. Also, this is a review after reading 5 chaps so I can't rate World background as the world is still being discovered. What I do read are good stories (aside from my guilty pleasure ones hehe), and I can undoubtedly say this is one of those.Tho I must say that explanations in between dialogues are a bit too long, it's worth reading nonetheless.What I liked the most while reading was the story's character. They didn't feel 1 dimensional and dialogues actually felt real and not just forced lines like in a play.I liked the touch of comedy which I think will be there throughout the story and I also liked how the author knows how to develop the characters.In just 4 chapters you will notice that the MC is growing as he navigates through life and business. And oh do I like the business touch lol! Anyway, all in all, I think it'll be a great read so it's going in my library, and here's my 5-star review keke.
This review is at chapter 70~ (minor spoilers) Honestly, this novel is pretty good and I suggest giving it a read, but it most definitely isn't for everyone. All the bases of a good novel are hit like a good power system, interesting concept, lots of things to be discovered, etc.) The more glaring issue, and honestly why some people will drop this novel, is the MC. To put is plainly, the MC is more or less an idiot consistently. For some reason, the author makes him 25 years old when his actions are more in line with someone who is around 16. He constantly craves validation yet acts like a man child several times. To top it off, in a tournament, for reasons purely chalked up to plot contrivance, doesn't kill two of his enemies. The author excuses this by saying he isn't focused on killing but exploring and seeing new things. That doesn't make any sense because...you know... he is literally in a pvp tournament and used to be top 1% in a pvp centered game. I will keep reading because I hope, maybe naively, that the MC won't stay a complete idiot for long and the rest of the novel is pretty cool.
Read this novel years ago on royal road. Hope you update this as it was great but does need to be proof read. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXD
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