Mafia Heartbeat

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At first I love Wuxiaworld but after so many novels from Gravity Tales moved to Wuxiaworld, it make hate it and sad...........................................................

If you are a serious reader better stay out of this novel, if you like MC with thousand way of insult then there you have it. The minus is the stability of the updates, everything else is o.k. Sorry for bad star ratting, the unstable of the updates makes me lost.

I just can't get over it. I love it too much I wish I can have all the chapters at once and read it through out the night. This is my kinda novel, I wouldnt mind sacrifising my sleep for it

This book was dropped. Don't waste Stones on this . Find the raw if curious, but honestly, it wasn't that great anyway. Hate this character limit amount.

- - - - 200 chapter review - - - -Take into account:- The novel is written by a guy like you or me, not a Japanese manga team.- The Author gets paid by people’s donations and stones, and with that has written hundreds of chapters.Negatives;- The first part of the novel (up to 56-80ish) is riddled with errors and inconsistencies, often dramatically breaking the feeling of immersion. It gives the impression that the Author was personally just scrapping by with his novel, and not thinking everything through.- The first portion also is pretty cliché in its story, (but would yours be better? 🤷u200d♂️).- Lots of the later chapters are premium, but that’s typical with novels now, the chapters also vastly vary in size at that point.Positives:- For being a video game plot, the story elements come across as fresh, even with the cliché under-developed presentations.- Even though typical ‘emotional bait’ was used, I couldn’t help but get really angry and involved in the negative events happening to the MC. Mostly I felt more invested in the MC’s real life than in his game life, which is fine! 👍- The writing quality of the later chapters really improves and you can’t help but realize that the Author actually has great talent. ((Good job Author))- I didn’t think this would be another ‘daily addiction’ novel by the time I finished, but I was wrong. —-((AUTHOR: Don’t take what people say here so seriously, the positive or the negative. You just write the story for yourself and find some irl buds to get your positive feedback from. Humans with the internet’s anonymity will say some awful, hateful things, without thinking twice. Plus, the internet has some mentally messed up people who get angry for no reason. Personally I have some cool friends through board games, there are usually local clubs most places. The goal being finding people who you can relate to without a screen between you.))

This might seem like a cheap rating considering I haven't started reading this yet but I feel like it already deserves one '5 Star' review for the synopsis alone. The explanation for the RPG elements IRL is phenomenal then to top it off the MC's name is Ronald. I don't know why I just love the fact that his name is Ronald. I am contemplating giving a whole other 5 star review just for that, no sarcasm.

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