The story is good so far.. Writing Quality: There isn't much to complain about. Character Design: It's okay imoWorld Background: It's good also. Update Stability: 1 chapter a day. Story Development: Going at a good pace currently, again imo My Rating: 4 stars, but I'll give the author a 4.6 stars rating to encourage him. Recommendation: I'll advise you read it as it is a great story imo. Also if the first chapters are disappointing to you, I suggest you read till about chapter 40 before you decide if you want to drop it. The first chapters aren't really that good imo, but the book started getting better for me at about chapter 30 or so. Also there are some places I personally feel the author didn't execute properly, but since he's new, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. If you check my write up you'll see I put imo in most of the places because they are my opinions. My thoughts are different from what you'll think about the book. Read it... Only then will you know if it's good.
WOW This is a very good novel and I highly recommend that you add and read this in you library. I Hope that this novel will continously update and add new chapters.
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So opinion of the first 20 chapters is not bad nor good just average and all 20 chapters take place in the span of 2 or 3 days so it is super slow paced and the fact it follows a 3 year old makes it worse
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