lost cause | billie eilish

Spoiler (I don't like to close it with spoiler tab:> hehe )I SKIMMED all the raw just now around 480chapters, Cliche story sigh in novels where he can get rich and omniponent. MC's attitude kinda good compared to other with cheat system, MC is humble and not lustful but he will bared his fangs if someone threatened his loveones. Plot revolves around Entertainment and Business circle, no medical nor cultivation occured, his skills are reasonable (Godly) but not unscientific/supernatural (skills such as acting, writing,singing, directing,cooking, business etc that are the only I have seen on the whole story(i skimmed but I haven't notice those). Lot of face smacking happened but MC didn't initiated them, bunch of braindead Mobs love digging their own grave (generic lustful Youngmaster preying Swans)RomanceLot of girls fall in love with MC, but he is dedicated for one girl and rejected them all, but there is a second female lead who's business genius and an artist, she's willing to secretly support the MC and there's even that she's willing to sacrifice her life for MC, truly unrequited and unconditional love. FL likes cosplaying Catgirl and has close relationship with Second FL (sisters) so I think it's reasonable to end up with these 2 Treasured girl. Unlike other harem they build romance slowly MC at the start was unwilling to love other girl other than FL

Highly recommend this novel to anyone. Having a large harem that the Mc treats well is refreshing and is one of the reasons I stayed to read this. Nothing else like it on the platform I’ll tell you that.

- World background is the same as every other novel out there.- MC is blind and acts without having any substance to back his actions ( ex: if some one cuts you on the road with a car twice your cars size [like a truck], do you try to hit the truck just to satisfy petty emotions?) <- Well the MC would!- The author forces a lot of the interactions the MC has with the outside world (For example a side character will do something just so the MC can react to it in a certain way [aka brainless side characters]).MC and world building are unoriginal and just horrendous in general. I gave 5 star to uploading speed since I don't know what the speed actually is :)- While not a lot the translator also messes up names once or twice.

It's a shame it wasn't chosen, I love novels in which the MC is immortal! Does anyone know anything else to recommend that the MC is immortal?I'll try to continue reading this in MTL, but from what I've seen the writing seems almost unintelligible.

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Overall great but with a few flawswriting quality-Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good.Stability-For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back...story development-Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still.Character design-Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger.But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone.Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family  (pure speculation)World Background-Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge.Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.

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I read first chapter just to look how it is, but suddenly I got hooked in and was kept reading and reading. This has great potential and will do good if given some exposure. Keep it up!