Adam is the GOAT no need for any reason to give 5 starts Q.What inspired you to create Adam ? did you used already existing character in other novel as base for Adam ? I want novel where the MC is like Adam ..
I find it hard to believe that the MC at peak mana control realm can't suppress with his aura alone the soldiers of wu kingdom in the mist forest who were part of soldiers who hurt meiyi who were just meager qi realm and the commander is probably only at early mana perception realm despite mc being enrage why is that? When a bad guy has higher realm , they can suppress thier enemy with aura alone but the mc don't?And why is he always late? When the elf queen is starting to battle allaina , seth is already near and he only took action when the queen is nearly dying going for the tree. As if you pause the whole world when you're writing a battle scene only focusing the time on battle. I mean seth should be already moving towards the tree to weaken allaina and yet he seems to just stood like an idiot watching the fight. And this kind of thing happens all the time making some kind of hero saving the day. Seriously! Stop that kind of BS!
Author, please give up. This is just terrible. The conversations suck. The characters suck. The writing sucks. The smut sucks. It all just sucks. Please give up and do something meaningful with your life instead of wasting it away here.
Chapters are a little long try to keep it between 800-1200 word count. You want people to read more. I like the story lots of gore and apocalyptic themes here. This is going to be an interesting read!
Got bored. Wrote whatever comes to mind. Don't expect it to be great. I could trash it if I get sick of it. so enjoy it if you can.btw, I won't be proofreading this. so if there's grammatical errors. then ;P hahahaha
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