Lily's Twin Sister (Editing)

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

A new work from Nana, so great thing to be expected here. Nice and concise development and immersive world building, that will just suck you in. Can’t wait for more chapter. ;D

Read till 55 chapters.Better than 90% same genre WNs.InterestingIt still lacks some thingsLike Fast paced , Fewtimes dialogue breaks immersion and character depths are lacking but good enough.Then world building and power scaling are okayish.I like your Villainess novel more.I would recommend you Young Master's POV.In that novel Character interaction, depths and power scaling are top tier with decent world building and good pacing depending on situation.Well good work.

I just read like 12 chapters and i just want to say I am a very picky reader an like action and bloodpumping scene from like get go 4-5 chapters but damn this novel just hooked me so hard I kept reading fist of all story was so fleshed I felt like I was reading the script of some nwe hit movie second mc character it showed just best for someone in his situation would behave and it didn't show  much about world background I think it will also be amazing I would suggest to most reader they should at least stick till free chapters.

Really nice book 💕 love it. can't wait to see how it turns out

Gave myself 5 stars,cuz why not? Anyway, do let me know what you think about it