Let them print cards, not slay gods

Though there’s only 6 chapters out right now, they have made me already appreciate this novel for a couple of reasons.1. Emily is cute2. Though the Author could’ve just written a smut chapter, he skipped over it, meaning this novel isn’t a full on smut novel which I appreciate3. Isaac’s last name is Hargraves (I don’t know if this has a connection to his other novel, but if it does… good job)4. I like cute romance5. Good skills

Action packed and so good quality writing skills this book is worth reading 💯😊

Why aren't more people here?? This is amazing! Let's go into details.Writing quality would need more adjustments. It gets quite clustered and a bit confusing which is bad bcs it underwhelms the feels of the story. I recommend using grammarly, and the add-ons (author's note) should also be fluidly mixed into the story. This is the only problematic part of this novel i can pin down. Stability of updates seems good enough.Story development is interesting, We follow the protagonists from their knuckeheaded state which leads them into trouble before we enter the main interlude. My advise though is that it might get confusing and thus irritating to readers so it'll do good for the novel if the exposition is written more clearly.I keep saying clearly so lemme explain-- some parts feel clustered, despite it being a first perspective, the character's thoughts and the exposition should mingle well. It clashes a lot in the story leaving the readers quite confused. It'd great if author manages to capture the choas of the character's mind while streamlining the exposition with it. Smoothness, that's what i'm talking about. To be blunt, the writing feels a bit jarring and difficult to follow due to its slight erraticness.Despite its jaggard edges i see immeasurable potential, i like the dialogue and the way they speak. The characters feels authentic, from the two shi- idk but mc and their? friend. To infinity, i quite like her sleeping danger vibes, it was executed quite well enough to leave a lasting impression on readers (me haha).In conclusion, this feels raw. I see the potential, its impressive, the synopsis hooked me from the very first instant and I'm not kidding- who wouldn't like to see two brats messing up the world? Well i most definitely do. Believe it or not its an original concept.But it'd benefit from more editing. Like i say, it feels like the rawest version straight from the author's mind. More delibration would do it well, do consider author. Regardless, kudos to this wonderful piece of fiction. Keep going author, oh and I lied, you're cringe but you're not the only cringe one, we all are! And that's why you need to be cringe for us the cringe readers to actually enjoy... okay lemme see myself out lol.

alrighte, new novel, here we go!!. i'll write my reviews after i read 100+ chapters. overall i gave it 5/10 first cuz the synopsis and all. and 3 stars first too all.

All that glitters is gold

Pirate A: -Panting- Uh Mister Happy... it's our boss...

Everything went still, and for a few minutes I felt it. That anger, that frustration, like nothing I could ever imagine... my eyes went a bright purple,hair changing colour. I was becoming my worst nightmare.

Shaking his head at this disciples weak willpower and also grimacing at what was probably the Madam's way of punishing him, he said to his frozen in shock disciple.