Hello I admire our story And I hope you keep adding chapters because I love this kind of main character where it's weak at first, but there's a clear possibility of developing again.And I hope you keep adding chapters because I love this kind of main character where it's weak at first, but there's a clear possibility of evolving again. 😉😉❤️❤️
Hello author, chapter 1 here, I still don't know if the world is real or it's just a game, but even if it's just a game, it seems to be interesting, since the protagonist said that it looks real, I'll keep reading, congratulations and hope that the story is good.
Very good book. Although the flow is slightly missing. Unlike other books there is no monotonous drain and thus the book is very captivating and interesting. We don’t have 10 chapters for one stupid thing.If you want a very quick and stable development with amazing new ideas.
So far i dont really have any suggestions. I just hope you dont drop the novel. As long as you keep the chapters come I'll keep supporting you. Thats all
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
On a table to the side was a cloak and a mask. The cloak was rimmed with gold and silver stitches. The needle work on the cuffs depicted a battle of ice and fire. A gold chain hung from one shoulder to the other, keeping them in place.
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