Leonariz: The Innocent Amazona

Have read till Chapter 54.Writing quality - 5/5 - Great quality of writing.Story Development - 3/3 - Pretty boring all things said. The MC just follows behind Tang San. I know that isn't bad but he literally changed nothing much. His dialogues with other characters is minimal and he literally spends most of his time cultivating. Good points of this story was his determination of not killing soul beasts for spirit rings and having a decent MC that isn't desperate for Harem. At the same time, I feel that MC is asexual, as there is no love interest or even mention that he finds anyone interesting in a romantic way.Character Design - 3/3 - Bland MC. The MC always maintains a distance with everyone, being overly 'polite' in every scene. The MC always stays polite except for few times like when Xiao Wu was injured by Zhao Wuji during the test. MC wanting to keep to the OG timeline is really unreal, he is always mindful of how he would affect the story, that he does nothing to change things deemed 'helpful' for Shrek Seven. I would have liked a bit more originality and creativity here, as it seems a bit forced. Updating Stability - 5/5 - No commentWorld Background - 5/5 - It's Soul land, one of my favourite ff world background.Overall - 4.2/5.0 - Great for casual reading and for those who do not know OG Soul land 1.

This story should keep up because its freaking hyping me in my mind it was like Fantasy vs Advance tech, Angels vs Cyborgs. ahhhh this gives me nostalgia.

The book is nice but the write needs to improve.

Its good .👍.........,.......,.............................................................................................................

I mean it is just pure fire what can i even say. the system is perfect, the adventure is perfect, but i didnt like that one scene where he spent some divinity points to use hammer of the gods. Imo should have waited until he use miracle or wish

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The butterfly let out a powerful screech that made me froze on the spot. But as I looked at it, a screen popped up.

En el segundo después Freya estaba sonrojada por la mirada directa de Isaac