Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.
Whats with the 400 "bonus" (locked) chapters. That's 1600 spirit stones. Wtf to read a book now with a stable update schedule on qidian requires so fukn much ss.
Ok this story seems quite nice. BUT it seems MUCH is lost in translation. One second this is happening and then "Bam!" the story changes. No clue how or why. I am not sure if this was the writing style of the author or if the translator just omits weird parts.
So as a reader I say enjoy it but prepare to be frustrated with how the story bounces around and you as a reader have to figure out wtf is going on. I myself still have parts I am unsure what happen.
Damn, this is one of the best SciFi, Mecha novels that I have read !
The translation quality is excellent and the update stability is great.
The world building is done in an understandable manner and the character designs are intriguing.
I am looking forward for more chapters and am looking forward to the unveiling of He's and Mu's background!
Author and Translating Team, please keep up the Great Work!
The noval is pretty good. We follow the MC as he develop, learn, and build himself. I guess I gave it low rating because the main plot still isn't clear to me until now (ch238). I can see that the author is building the MC and the others. But until now isn't giving enogh answers to questions about where is the is novel going. Great Mech battels, that is not enogh.
Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.
Good story....only problem with the mc....he still acts like a beast.....Hope he will change in the future..Need more chapters to further comment....(:(:(:.......................................................
A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really?
The novel is well made and is enjoyable. The only thing that sucks about this novel is the unsatisfactory ending which leaves too many questions as the translator and the author said. This novel might lead to fan-fiction if someone has the time since there are many unanswered questions which I don't want to spoil.
While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something.
While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.
It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.
Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
In a new era where society prioritize the usage of flying mechs(imagine sports cars, but more advanced). A boy with a mysterious origin is raised in a abandoned planet, soon finds a capable friend/machine that will forever help change his life. He is not OP, as of ch.50 there are many things going on in his world, new things keep popping up and you would wonder where this might take him. Gradual improvement after fighting with tough experts and huge amount of training. ;0 Definite Read
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So as a reader I say enjoy it but prepare to be frustrated with how the story bounces around and you as a reader have to figure out wtf is going on. I myself still have parts I am unsure what happen.
The translation quality is excellent and the update stability is great.
The world building is done in an understandable manner and the character designs are intriguing.
I am looking forward for more chapters and am looking forward to the unveiling of He's and Mu's background!
Author and Translating Team, please keep up the Great Work!
While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.
It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.
Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
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