Kimi no Michibiki: Rebirth of the Soul

Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes.  With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.

Am I the only one that laughed at the synopsis? I don't know why but I just found it funny that Gaia said no and then got destroyed because of it.

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The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good.We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say itInside, we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

So I mean. I finished volume 1. I have very mixed feelings about this. The world, story, development, mystery are all superb. The writing quality is excellent. The update frequency is rather low but I’m just glad they are still going. Now for the negatives. It seems that every single person the MC becomes invested in emotionally or physically romantic or not just gets shipped off somewhere or dies. The first two women he liked they just moved and ghosted. The second romantic encounter he develops a strong bond and feelings with the woman for her to die in his arms. I guess I’d just like maybe one(?) partner who’s and excellently written character to not be killed off as soon as they are fully fleshed out? It’s just a downer and makes me not want to keep going because they made such interesting characters, and it would feel like a replacement or copy to have someone with a similar personality or way of talking. I’ll keep going for the 2nd volume and hope it gets better in that regard because I truly do like the story and will update my thoughts at that point here. Thank you author hope you’re well.

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Seems interesting enough but it seriously needs an editor to help correct all the run-on sentences. The main character so far seems pretty dim witted as he wanders around like a tourist. Hopefully it will improve with time but who knows.

I came searching for a good sports novel. Stumbled upon this gem. Binged this novel and I can't get enough of it. MORE MORE MORE I WANT MORE