Jitsuwa, watashi wa zen pawafuru kunai

It's only the beginning but your chapter 8 convinced me because it shows a possibility of reflection for the use of magic that I had not really considered before. I hope that the side full of thoughtful thought and strategy will be introduced in more detail in your webnovel ;) I offer you my encouragement so don't disappoint us

Well  , I give you a very good rating because I think that there is great potential in your webnovel and that it hides a lot of things in my opinion... I should not be able to give such a good rating because there are not enough chapters but truly, if you continue like this I think I can say without fear that you will be able to keep this perfect note, we will see at the end of the 1st arc

Well, now that you have released around ten chapters I think I can give you an opinion.... I really like the story, I would have thought it was basic but I don't get the impression. You have a writing style of your own that I find great (you push your style very far in the last chapters that I read, I love it) The characters are very endearing and they have a personality of their own (even if I have impression that you are hiding a lot from us) and your author's notes are very funny. That's why I give you 5 stars for everything EXCEPT for the stability of updates... Indeed, you come out too randomly. However, you told us that you are trying to stabilize your posts and I am sure that you will succeed, so if you succeed I will really give you 5 stars! good luck, I can't wait for real, to read more!!

いつも楽しませてもらってます。私はこの小説の世界観が好きです。まだ明らかにされていない設定がこれから明らかにされていくのが楽しみです。

I'm going to start directly: I read all your chapters already out at once because I really appreciated your idea. You have a really good writing style that improves throughout your writing. I have no negative criticism to make of you apart from that your characters are not described enough... But... I wonder if you are not doing it on purpose... Because, we notice in your last chapter that your character is very think about it so I'm almost sure that you're deliberately not describing certain characters too much to do it later (that's why I'm giving you 5 stars, hoping I'm not wrong). Anyway, Bravo, I'm happy to support a small novel creator, I hope he becomes popular!