Fillers! Fillers! Fillers! to the point of madness. I sort of like this book but also really hate this book. Never seen a story being so blatantly stretched out (maybe there are more out there but I never stuck around long enough to experience it)But I do like the book and it has potential but it could really do without the word salad to meet word count
I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good.The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now 👍
This is my first original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!
Love how edgy and dark the synopsis is. Be careful that you don't get a red streak in your hair from all that edge and start calling yourself Shadow the Edgehog! XD But anyway I'll give a good review cuz why not
I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.
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