"Of course, she saw you dumbass! You can go off and ruin your own life but don't go on ruining my own!" I was beyond angry. I was infuriated. I didn't even care that I was acting as rude as hell, because Jess deserved it. Jess obviously didn't understand what it was like to be truly in love–did I think that? No, I wasn't in love, that much I was sure of. Being in love meant that I was unselfish for the other person and wanted what was best for her. But I was being selfish. I wanted her to be with me.
Toni caught the change in his face and followed where his eyes went. She paled under his gaze and covered her scar, ready to pick her shirt and put it back.
I've read up to chapter 125 so I'll be honest in my opinion. I really like your idea for your story, but as well as having good successes, there are also mistakes.Mainly in grammar and continuity Example: in one chapter there was a character who clicked his tongue 5 times and the sighs: (Haaaaaa) seem like screams.It is very obvious that the author knows many Japanese, Korean and Chinese novels and brought some of his strengths to the novel, but he also brought his weaknesses like the personality of his protagonist.
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