Overall the story is good, but they did not end the story. Don't read if you expect any type of proper ending to a story. It is in the middle of a conflict scene for the last chapter.
What a cool 😎 and heartwarming 😍 start! I gotta say I am impressed with the grammar! No obvious mistakes, kudos! Now for the story quality, I am impressed also! Nice and engaging plot! Good luck with your future and I hope to see it ob December! This could be an anime or movie if chosen!
story is... okay.however, there is absolutely no logic and some obvious gaps in the story.no background for mcevents that happen dont follow logic or science yet no mention of magicyou were warned.
This is a. Novel already well into 300+ chapter pls do not copy works like this. Qidian please remove this as it is a blatant infringement of copyright and cheating.
I like your work Author and hope you don't stop writing until the very end. But i think you shouldn't write one fight with many chapter. Max 3 ideal and if you would increase it is killing the hype. It is just a thought and you shoul write your own story. I hope i can see the end of this beautiful story. Again thanks for the book.
Review of a musketeer pilot codenamed F. U. C. K.At this point in the multiverse calendar, I'm on the verge of brain rape.Signals from the common sense center stopped coming a week ago.Blowing bubbles from my saliva and squeezing out the remnants of my mind, I write this review.Mr. author if you see this, tell my relatives from the Union of Cultivation realms that I have learned Zen
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