In/Prisoned

hahaha this nobel is good, mc being cruel and emotionless after dying many times

writer quality is top notch,the character design is a little off page(if that is a word) also it will be adviceable if the mc ( Theodore) could be a little special apart from his specialist in dagger and all that.something like, coming across a hidden artic or journal or having a hidden bloodline,the  story development is above average but the fault lie that it is too plain author pls do something about that,thanx

There's really nothing negative I can say about this story. Beautifully written, strong and distinct characters, and a very intriguing premise that will keep the reader glued to the screen to find out more about what is going on. The dialogue is great and the splashes of Italian make it all the more authentic. I also think the cutting backwards and forwards in time and telling the story in non-linear fashion was an excellent technique to draw the reader in. I will be sure to keep reading on further in this one. The protagonist is a really well-developed character. He is one who has come from a poor family and I look forward to finding out how he has ended up rich and powerful pretending to be a man who we find out was murdered in front of him and has been communicating to him as a ghost. Great idea which has me eager to keep on reading. This one is definitely a must-read!

Really really enjoy Reading this! Its my top 5 novel right now! Just wish the author updated more frequently!

Dropped at ch 32. This is a very cliche Chinese story, which is made for 15 year old kids. So dont waste time on this novel.

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(As of chapter 58)Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more.Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way.Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up.World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in.Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).

Curious to see where the mc goes from here...will happily wait for new chapters, just hope to see even more uses of his system for devious reasons