A good rebirth + MMORPG story, I like the way the world in the game is described but nothing much is said about the real world except in the earlier chapters. Good mind candy till about chapter 900 when the writer adds a switching between timelines switch and quality drops. The writer starts forgetting things and things get confused and meaningless. Oddly enough the translation stops 2 chapters before end of story, why? I read the last 2 chapters in Chinese as well as the author notes in which the author apologizes for drop in quality and abrupt end, seems it was to hard to combine writing with his new job. Too bad really, but especially the first 600 chapters are a nice read.
.......................................................................................................there are some mistakes but the story is nice, please update more.........................................................................................................
I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation.It is relatable and wonderful plot!!
The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision
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