Immortality Begins from Binding to the Family

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An ok story ,some grammar mistakes ,Below average Story line some ideas taken from other novels no need to mention them ,misleading title is why i started i thought it was gonna be a chill novel ,till i got to chapter 36 where the author decided to make it 17+ which leads me to believe there will be some pretty rapey stuff , harems,multiple wives = milk those stones from viewers and build a harem with it lmao wasted time is all i see ,anyways good luck -1

Love this novel!! It has a bit of an issue with info dumps, but idm since I don’t play D&D.

Generic and lacking character. Two advantages of game novels are the option for creative world design and the option to have characters fail or die with limited consequences. Instead we got a generic fantasy world where his "talent" (a system that would never work IRL due to the imbalance caused) removes any sense of tension by giving him a ridiculous equipment, levelling and skill advantage over any other player. It's really cringy to have the MC called a "great god" for winning a lottery and the antagonists obviously went to How to be an Arrogant Young Master 101. At least in the first 30 chapters, MC has no real character of note (no relationships, quirks, personality), instead just following the rather dull plot line no questions asked. Overall, story is readable but very generic.

The comedic aspect of novels rarely makes me laugh but this novel does it constantly. The classic chinese lines can be frustrating at times and the interactions/dialogues seemed unatural/forced in a few chapters but that’s nothing compared to the joy this novel brings for me. Very good concept, comedic interactions, items, characters, mistery and world building (could be detailed a bit more but I assume that will happen in later chapters). The magic warfare rabbits are just goated! I could go into way more details but it’s unnecesary, just read it! I was frustrated for a few chs where it went to 🇨🇳🇨🇳 but i’m really glad I got past those

Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again.Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does.The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.

The protagonist is a little dumb, but I really liked the progress of the story.Keep up the good work.********************************************************************

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