It had a very good synopsis but it doesent match with the story in, 1. quality2. grammatical structure 3. no back story at all4. poor definition Im being generous with the rating.Learn from youre mistakes.
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Hello, struggling author Romeru here. First of all, thank you for checking out my novel, love you guys. This is my 3rd contracted novel here and hoping 3rd time is the charm T_T So please do try and read it if you have time.As tradition, here is what to expect when reading my novel,The Good:1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.2. I am your friend.The Reality:1. My main character is flawed and imperfect. He may be an apex badass, but there are moments when he is proven wrong. So if you are expecting a perfect MC who seem to always make the best decisions, you might not like this.2. Grammar mistakes. I tend to mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my native language T_T3. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.4. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.5. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.6. Character driven – The story will develop in a way that advances the story of the characters, MC or not.6. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span, so please do point out if I mistake what hair color one of the characters has.Here's what to do before reading this book:1. Play some music.2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I could do when people could fly using magic swords.4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book.Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
Before you go on a three paragraph rant about how I'm an uncultured swine who can't understand this "complex" fast-paced novel please be patient with me, or don't, either way, it doesn't make a difference. This novel is a pretty much-overdone cliche of the vicious cycle of "revenge" with a sprinkle of poor writing. Put down your torches let me elaborate. Pitchfork down? ok so essentially, the basic introduction of the plot is the overdone checklist of cliches, a beautiful unrivaled girl who no other can rival? check. Betrayal of a said beautiful girl or literally anyone close to him? check. What's this he's also trash but somehow the reason he's trash is cuz of a thing no one else has and now he's gonna prove the haters wrong? check. Merit is to be made that cliches were created because they work and blah blah blah, please shut up the only reasons cliches work is because it panders towards a certain demographic and said demographics are also the types to forgive this godawful terrible blight on storytelling. The concept is the only thing supporting this work, like for Allah's sake the characters are so god damn one dimensional, not a single one person has a fucking personality, not a one, and no calling someone trash over and over again or being slapped in the face does not count as them having a personality. That my friend is just a face slap, gosh i think the author of this work only creates characters to face slap and boy, do they get face slapped quite a fair bit. TLDR; Cliche Tropes overused, a boring world(like seriously all i know about this world is that a lot of sects exist and that they have an epic gladiator arena) and poor character development. I would rather read those CEO novels instead as they are forced to actually make the readers engage and care for their characters.
Not going lie. Its slow to start. BUT Oh My Word... once they get off that planet. Just epic! Love the characters and their unique personalities. All the different Heroes/Villains from Ancient China Dynasties and how they incorporate them in the plot and general story!10/10 across the board!Must read!
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